Sonadow Repunzle chapter 1

Me: done
Sonic:* stops a stop watch* 3 days 14 hours 12 minutes and 43 seconds
Me: -_-’
Sonic: * reads* OMG HAHAHAHA
Shadow: * comes in * what’s so funny?
Me: um nothing
Shadow: * reads* Swivy
Me: yes?
Shadow: you have 3 seconds to live
Me: * runs*

Chapter 1 : once upon a time

Once upon a time in a place of magic and mystery there was a manor house hidden deep in the heart of a forest. But no one could get to the house because it was surrounded by a wall of magic that kept intruders out , but more importantly kept it’s prisoners inside . One of those prisoners was a young hedgehog girl named Shadow. She was black with red rose stripes and  glowing crimson eyes. She also had long beautiful black hair striped with red.  She sat in her room on her bed in a silk blue dress. She was sketching on a piece of paper tight now but later she would paint what ever was on the paper . She was a wonderful artist and made you almost think you were in the paintings. She looked up at her door as a loud scuffling sound started outside. With in a few short seconds the double doors bursts open and  two people  rolled in wrestling on the floor. One was a light blue hedgehog  with white patches and  baby blue eyes. His spikes were ling and roughly cut and scruffy. He was wearing a light tan colored shirt with a brown vest   laced together in front. His pants were brown like his  vest and he also had brown boots. The other was Star , Shadows sister . She was a dark crimson red with black hair and red eyes. She was wearing a tan tunic ( like link XD) with white leggings and brown boots.  She had Sky pinned to the floor.
“ GIVE ME MY COOKIE DAMN IT !!” She yelled at him
He just smirked and stuck something in his mouth quickly. Shadow giggled.
“ YOU BASTARD!!” Star yelled grabbing his neck.
Shadow watched at they wrestled around some more and finally got up. She grabbed Star by one ear and Sky by  his ear.
“ now that enough you two if Amy come home and sees you both fighting it will be the end of me” she told them.
“ well he started it , that was the last cookie and he stole it from me “ Star complained.
“ hey it could have been poisoned and I would have gladly risked my life for you Star “ Sky said sounding noble.
“ my ass you would “
Star swiped at Sky her fists balled up trying to punch him. Shadow shook her ear and she stopped.
“ ok you two I said enough now your going to kiss and make up is that clear?”
“ yes ma’am “ they both replied to her.
Shadow let them go and Star glared a Sky with a look to make anyone poop. Sky looked back at her freaked out.  She smirked.
“ well come here Sky and get your kiss”  She said in an almost taunting way.
Sky bolted from the room and Star laughed. Shadow rolled her eyes.
“ I don’t see how that poor boy is alive with you scaring him like that. “ Shadow said  going back to her sketch.
“ well it helps that he likes me “ Star replied.
Shadow rolled her eyes again and started to sketch. Star sat beside her and watched. Shadow looked as the drawing started to make it’s self clearer . It was a hedgehog , he was sitting in a garden reading. But it didn’t look like Sky , but some one else entirely.
“ Who is that? “ Star asked taking the sketch.
“ not sure but it’s just something that came to mind”  Shadow replied relaxing a bit .
“ hmmm”
Star continued to inspect the drawing and Shadow laid on her bed thinking. The door burst open for a second time that day making both girls jump. Sky was standing there panting .
“ AMY’S……COMING!!! “ he finally got out .
Shadow and Star jumped up quickly and headed to the front  door Sky trailed behind a little. Star went past the main entrance to another door that lead to the kitchen. Sky and Shadow walked outside . Outside the house., there was a garden  full of different fruits veggies and flowers that surrounded all but the main path. There was a sudden surge of magic energy in the forest in front of them and Sky tensed up. A hole opened letting in a pink hedgehog with emerald eyes. She was wearing a silly looking pink frilly dress  and  pink high heals witch wasn’t good for riding. She approached them on her brown horse and leaped off. A small fairy rested on her right shoulder. That was Milo. He looked like a grass green enchenda with dark black and green fairy wings. Shadow and Sky bowed as she approached them. She nodded at there presence.
“ Sky take my horse to the stable “ She ordered.
“ yes milady  “ Sky answered taking the horse away.
Amy turned her attention to Shadow.
“ are the chores done? “
“ yes milady”
“ Dinner made? “
“ yes “
Amy  leered at Shadow for a second and then walked into the house .
“ I expect dinner in at least half an hour make sure Star knows that”
“ yes milady”
Milo flew off Amy’s shoulder and landed on Shadows.  He yanked hard on her hair and Shadow yelped.
“ Stupid little bast- “
Amy turned to her.
“ Excuse me ?!”
“ not you Milo pulled my hair”
Milo looked at Amy innocently and she glared at Shadow.
“ I raised you since you and your sister were babies  Shadow . I expect you to tell the truth and get everything done that I ask of you before I get home “
“ but every thing is do-”
“ Silence! You will have double chore tomorrow for talking back to me is that understood”
Shadow looked down.
“ yes milady “
Amy glared at her again and walked off to her room. Shadow sighed and walked to the kitchen , at least there it was peaceful.